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Minor adjustments were made and the website is online :) Paulhoman.com!

In the search to a new look and feel for my company im working on some different concepts. To find out wich is the best im hoping to get your oppinion on it.

About the style
thinking about what-to-do-know I was looking and walking circles in my room.. And suddenly I had this idea, why not have your own workingspace on your website! So I basicly tried to make a working space in the header. The screens are the same as im using right now, same goes for the keyboard and mouse and the paper :) Plant and the window are stocks i bought.

I'd love to hear your oppinions!
Please take a look at concept 1 also! :)

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I love the top of the page... just masterpiece bro!! it looks great just like a real photo :), good technique keep it up, bottom and content I would change some, maybe colours because the one you've used seems to be a little "dirty", instead of the top which is clean and fresh. I would also work some with background which in my opinion should be brighter and the transition beetween top and bottom of the page might be softer. I suppose you've tried to make it feel like a desk but it's too visible and divides page into two independent parts.
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:iconplexum:
Nice design, I prefer this concept :)

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:iconsneakyone1990:
Thnx mate :)

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:iconcommander-luminaire:
It's in another language :noes:

I like it, it's very slick and polished :la:

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:iconsneakyone1990:
Thats called dutch! lol, wait ill make it in english :P

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Good job. I don't think the light should look "exactly" the same on both monitors, but I like the design overall of the page, and your colors. Good execution of your concept!

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Wow, I like it very much. I prefer this one to the previous one. This one is more individual. Your logo is very minimalistic and elegant. Like the colors and the whole "atmosphere". Great work! :thumbsup:
:iconcommander-luminaire:
Nah, it doesn't need to be in English :B

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leuk concept, ik hou altijd wel van een bureau op een website vol met allerlei dingen.

Het raam vindt ik ook heel cool erin passen, wel vindt ik dat je het raam en de beeldschermen moet centreren onder het menu.

Voor de rest lijk het bij de monitors nog niet dat ze daar horen te staan. Misschien een schaduw erachter tegen de "muur" aan? Hetzelfde geld voor de plant.

De andere objecten lijken echt dat ze daarhoren, mooie schaduwen eronder!

Misschien mis ik nog 1 ding.. een Mac? :P ;)

De website is over het algemeen heel modern en ziet er clean uit en daar hou ik van!

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:iconsneakyone1990:
But I just changed it for you! :(

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:iconsneakyone1990:
Hmm good point, ill work on that some more! :) Thnx for your comment!

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